It was cute in theory, but just broke my heart over its flaws. Eden could have written better, added some creativity, to really let this story shine. Eden\’s writing style, and that\’s why I was so very disappointed- I truly believe Ms. I know, it surprised me too! I really enjoy Ms. Yesh! My whines completed, I cannot say I hated the book. So she announced herself as Mary- so what! Let it be a fun little nick-name! No, instead we get to to through this – I guess- meant to be touching \”oh Marion suits you so much more\” They\’re practically the same, yet there\’s this big hubbapaloo about one versus the other. WHAT is the blimey difference if it\’s Marion or Mary? Almost every historical romance book I\’ve read has nicknames from their hellishly long \’Christian\’ names. Dry up, buttercup! \”…she asked with a saucy raise of her eyebrow.\” How does one raise an eyebrow in a saucy manor? Intrigued, challenging, skeptical- yes, I can see that, but saucy? Again, something that wouldn\’t normally bother me, but I feel like this could have been better. She was crying, now she\’s giggling with joy.
Both the child and our heroine went from happy to sad to happy to sad in 5 seconds flat. Eden hasn\’t missed such a silly thing as this, so it bugs me. I\’m not usually this picky, but I know from other books Ms. He hadn\’t expected her to.\” Uh, yes, that\’s why they just stated it was a rhetorical question, so you\’ve just repeated yourself there. This felt like someone told me \”they ran into each other a few times- he loved her.\” Um, what? How? When? I can imagine he was feeling perhaps uplifted, but for a man who in the last of this series gave every indication he shut everyone out and to suddenly open up and fall in love with her at 30%? Common! \”She didn\’t answer his rhetorical question. I go into these stories knowing this will happen, but I enjoy being drawn there. He has had very little interaction with our heroine. 30% into the story and our hero is falling in love with our heroine. This, my third read, has been downright disappointing.
My second was a little disappointing with how similar I felt the stories were.
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